Could you please rate/fix/comment my yugioh deck?It’s a Red-eyes/Dragon deck!
Remember to rate first and then leave your comments and fixes!Thank you!

Note:All the normal monsters that are not dragon type will get replaced if I find a dragon with more or equal ATK and DEF!

Also,can you list some good dragons,dragon syncros and dragon support cards and in which booster packs to find them?Thanks!

Here is the deck:

Monsters:
1.Flamvell Guard
2.Magna Drago x2
3.Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon
4.Soul Tiger
5.Debris Dragon
6.Masked Dragon
7.Man-Eater Bug
8.Knight of the Red Lotus
9.Armed Dragon LV3
10.Red-Eyes Wyvern x2
11.Flamvell Magician
12.Exiled Force
13.Blue-Eyes White Dragon
14.Gorz the Emissary of Darkness
15.Luster Dragon
16.Des Koala
17.Armed Dragon LV5
18.Luster Dragon #2
19.Strong Wind Dragon
20.Spear Dragon
21.Penguin Soldier
22.Red-Eyes Black Dragon x2
23.The Dragon Dwelling in the Cave
24.Spirit Reaper
25.Giant Germ
26.Big Eye
27.Red-Eyes Black Chick
28.Vanguard of the Dragon
29.Marshmallon

Spells:
1.Creature Swap
2.Swords of Revealing light
3.Card Destruction
4.Megamorph
5.Stamping Destruction
6.Rush Recklessly
7.Giant Tsunade
8.Ookazi
9.Brain Control
10.Lightning Vortex
11.Magical Mallet
12.Mage Power
13.Mystical Space Typhoon
14.Black Pendant

Traps:
1.Stronghold the Moving Fortress
2.Scrap-Iron Scarecrow
3.Widespread Ruin
4.Raigeki Break
5.Spellbinding Circle
6.Metalmorph
7.Magic Cylinder
8.Slip of Fortune
9.Torrential Tribute
10.Call of the Haunted
11.Bottomless Trap Hole
12.Limit Impulse

Extra deck:
1.Exploder Dragonwing
2.Ancient Fairy Dragon
3.Power Tool Dragon
4.Looking for Stardust Dragon,trade anyone?

Haves:http://www.tradecardsonline.com/im/editC… +much more!Just ask for a specific card and I will tell you if I haves it!Also if you have an account on tradecardsonline.com leave a link!I want a Stardust Dragon (ultra rare or ultimate rare or secret rare,doesn’t matter to me!)my e-mail: andreasskevis@hotmail.com contact me through there!

Btw,is adding "Light and Darkness Dragon" to my deck worth it?

2.)She finished the last man and walked over to the prince “you have no idea, what I have done.” she whispered. He looked her over. “Young and beautiful lady, come and sit by Me.” she did not want to but could not refuse the prince. She climbed the stairs and found it difficult to keep moving. She sat close to the bright blonde prince. He laughed his hair swaying. “Prince Roya” he spoke mirth in voice. She plastered on a smile. “Prince, you say.” She looked at him one eyebrow rose. He smiled oblivious to the charm she had put out. “You know” he said “your hair is like the light from the moon. The pale light that shines from the far reaches of its beauty. Yes. It shines like that of the moon. She grabbed a bit of her hair not noticing. He smiled and turned back. She sat, still enamored by the handsome prince. Several hours later she walked out the room. Doja, the guard handed her a letter. She walked and looked. Carefully ripping the seal off, she read the note. he asked to see her. This clearly shook her. She wanted almost nothing to do with him. Although he was gorgeous he seemed to play around. She asked others were his chambers were. The looked displeased and walked away. One man looked at her and smiled. Slightly drunk she thought and he pointed down the hall. She walked slowly not very happy. Her outfit swirled around her. She wore Silver bottoms that extended with a pouf. A large tunic reaching her mid thigh. Its chest a sloping V, it was black . The colors of Oliverex. Her home town, she did not know but what seemed to be nice place was her new one. The colors attracted qiute a lot of attention. Most people hated black. She touched the pendant, it glowed a bright blood color. It asked for blood. She denied it the lust it wanted.

3.)she never knew, but had glimpses of her father. He had long shoulder length blonde hair. He smiled at her but never talked. She thought he probly died. When she opened her eyes tears pored down her cheek. The man who was supposed to be an angel, reached out. She didn’t want to be touched. She walked away.
“ I don’t know much, only after I was kidnapped.” he looked at her. “you weren’t kidnapped , you came willing” he looked a little unhappy. “ Noeh, he’s your father.” she looked up at the stars. Letting out a blood curdling scream she ran and attacked him. Her hands beat his chest her tears soaked his cloak. He grabbed her and held her close. “You want to know, what happened.” she noded and looked into his eyes.

“ three hundred and ninty seven years ago; the man looked at his daughter. He knew she would end up dieing. He loved her and wanted to protect her. One day he came upon a young boy and his father. Both were sightly. There hair long and silver. There eyes a vibrant green. They looked tired and he asked them to rest. The group went to the house. The little girl was sitting on a bench carfully braiding her straw dool. She looked up and shrieked. The boy walked to her and poked her head. She fainted. He smiled and walked back. “ she;s very pretty. someday shes to be my wife” he laughed and walked to her. He smiled and started to stoke he hair.
when a young girl, is followed by an angel. An angel of death.
What can she do? ecept run and thats just what she does.

To all the losers who refercens and compare my baby to the bible i will kill you
hes an angel of death and he is hot

HOODIES:
Michigan logo gray pullover hoodie
Juicy Couture brown terry zip up hoodie
Hollister empire waist green hoodie

TOPS:
Orange Hollister cami with white dots (have to wear something over it cuz of dress code)
white Abercrombie v neck
gray 3/4 sleeve v neck
yellow 3/4 sleeve v neck
long sleeved brown A&F v neck
Hollister navy blue long sleeve t shirt
Solid T’s in gray, yellow, orange
Sky blue A&F polo
3/4 sleeve A&F sheer top in pink
Vintage "Blondie" graphic T-shirt
PINK collegiate collection Michigan T-shirt
"Peace" graphic T shirt
Solid tanks in white, gray, black
"Fitch" logo gray T shirt
Solid long sleeved gray T shirt

PANTS:
Solid leggings in black, gray, brown
Hard Tail pants in black, brown
Light wash hugger jeans
Dark wash skinny jeans

SHOES:
White slim fit sneakers
Gray Nike Dunk sneakers
Beige Ugg boots (medium-short)
Orange&white Bebe Sport flip flops
Navy Bebe Sport flip flops
Solid brown flip flops
Brown studded flip flops
American Eagle beige moccasins

ACCESSORIES:
Brown wire necklace with small mosaic heart pendant
Friendship bracelets/anklets (a LOT!)
Navy Hollister tote or brown A&F tote with mooses all over it (I need at least 1 tote, if not both!)

MAKEUP:
Every lip gloss color pretty much
Every eyeshadow color pretty much
Mascaras: Telescopic black, DiorShow black, or Sephora blue
Eye liners: N.Y.C. black pencil, that Almay i-color Play Up Collection or whatever it’s called black liquid, Clinique dark dark brown powder liner
-NARS powder
-Bronzer (IDK what brand) that shimmers
-Clinique powder blush in pink, Dior powder blush in pink and purple-ish, Maybelline dream mousse blush in pink
-Maybelline foundation
-Concealers from either CoverGirl or Murad (or both!)
-Lipstick in ‘dark colors’ like deep red & deep purple
-Smashbox photo finish light

HAIR:
Style choices:
-1 French braid
-1 regular braid
-2 French braids
-2 regular braids
-Down (straightened) parted to the right
-Down (straightened) parted to the left
-Down w/ a headband (I have skinny squiggly black, thick beige and medium-thick gray, and thin red)
-Down w/ bobby pins
-Ponytail (high)
-Messy bun
Product choices:
-Shine spray from Garnier or Biolace
-Volumizing mousse
-Thickening serum
-Curl creme
-Hairspray
-Repairing milk (heat-activated)
-Heat protectant
-Detangler

Thank you!
Best answer gets: 10 points, recognition for best answer, AND i’ll make you a polyvore outfit!

Monsters-Mind Master
Jain Lightsworn Paladin
Mecha Bunny
Magna-Slash Dragon
Noisy Gnat
Samsara Lotus
Sea Koala
Armored Cybern
Hiro’s Shadow Scout
Kinka-Byo
Jutte Fighter
Blue Thunder T-45
5 Tokens (Any use)
Handcuffs Dragons
Gragonith Lightsworn Dragon
Mei-Kou Master of Barriers
Destiny Hero-Departed

Spell-Lightwave Tuning
Premature Burial
Block Attack
Pigeonholding Books of Spells
Black Pendant
Lightning Blade
Monster Reborn
Monster Reincarnation
Lightning Vortex
Change of Heart
Stop Defense
Card Rotator
Traps-Enchanted Javelin
Taunt
Shift
Magic Cylinder
Torriental Tribute
Light of Intervention
Blast with Chain
D-Fortune
Conscription
Light Spiral
Xing Zhen Hu
Also Black Rose Dragon

This deck is Pegasus Starter, Yugi Starter, Jaden Yuki 2 booster pack, crystal beast sapphire pegasus tin, and some other booster pack from a long long time ago.

Monsters x28
Slifer
Wingweaver
Gilford the Legend
Crab Turtle
Dark Magician
Opticlops
Homunculus
Double Coston
Kaiser Sea Horse
Darkfire Soldier #1 & #2
Battle Ox x2
Girochin Kuwagata
Sonic Duck
Fire Kraken x2
Shadowslayer
Aqua Madoor x2
Poison Mummy
Light & Earth – Hex-Sealed Fusion
The Forgiving Maiden
Trap Master
Hane-Hane
Armed Ninga
Ceremonial Bell

Spells x15
Polymerization
Dian Keto the Cure Master
Soul Exchange
Ookazi
Sparks
Change of Heart
Ground Collapse
Convulsion of Nature
MST
Malevoent Nuzzler
Black Pendant x2
Premature Burial
Fusion Gate
Turtle Oath

Traps x13
Enchanted Javelin x2
Waboku x2
Nutrient Z x2
Bottomless Trap Hole
Trap Hole
Cemetery Bomb
Dust Tornado
Skull Lair
Light of Intervention
Magic Drain

Any improvements, please let me know. Rayte on a scale of 1-10. NO INSULTS! Any insults will be reported.

(Normal)
Blue-Eyes White Dragon(x3)
Luster Dragon(x3)
Dragon Dwelling in the Cave
Koumori Dragon

(Effect)
Blue-Eyes Shining Dragon
Armed Dragon Lv.5
Armed Dragon Lv.3
Masked Dragon(x3)
Element Dragon
Mirage Dragon
Lord of D.
Spirit Ryu
Twin Headed Behemoth

(Fusion)
Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon

(Spell)
Flute of Summoning Dragon(x2)
Swords of Revealing Light
Symbol of Heritage
Dian Keto the Cure Master
Dark Factory of Mass Production
Mountain
Brain Control
Magical Mallet
Polymerization
Fusion Sage

(Trap)
Torrential Tribute
Shift
Magic Jammer
Trap Jammer
Spellbinding Circle
Riryoku Field
Call of the Haunted
The Dragon’s Bead
Magic Cylinder

The cards below are extras I have that I can put in this deck, and note that I would like to keep it between 40-45 cards. (I think I can get a Future Fusion, but I currently do not have one)

(Effect)
Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon
Theinin the Great Sphinx
Andro Sphinx
Sphinx Telia
Sanga of the Thunder
Elemental Hero Bladedge
Jinzo
Guardian Grarl
Despair from the Dark
Armed Dragon Lv.5
Mystic Swordsman Lv.2
Kaiser Seahorse
Adhesive Explosive
Panther Warrior
Kinetic Soldier
Exodia the Forbidden One
Dark Elf
Fire Princess
Harpy Queen
Harpy Lady 1
Harpy Lady 2
Harpy Lady 3
Rare Metal Dragon(x3)
Familiar Knight(x3)
Hero Kid
Man-Eater Bug
Trap Master
Disciple of the Forbidden Spell
Mystic Tomato(x2)
Sand Gambler
Crimson Ninja
Spirit Caller
Sonic Jammer
Tenkabito Shien
Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower
Anti-Aircraft Flower
The Agent of Force – Mars
Familiar Possessed – Hiita
Spear Dragon(x2)
Aswan Apparition
Chain Thrasher
Etoile Cyber
Prickle Fairy
Skelengel
Magician of Faith(x3)
Parasitic Ticky(x2)
The Trojan Horse
UFO Turtle
Tuned Magician
Mad Sword Beast(x2)
Bombardment Beetle
Pyramid Turtle(x2)
The Unfriendly Amazon
Amazon Archer
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Witch of the Black Forest(x2)
Spirit Reaper
Sand Moth(x2)
Princess of Tsurugi(x3)
Kuriboh(x2)
Dimension Jar
Red-Eyes B. Chick

(Normal)
Hyozanryu
Dark Magician
Red-Eyes B. Dragon
Luster Dragon #2(x3)
Summoned Skull(x2)
Gaia the Fierce Knight
Curse of Dragon
Dark Blade(x2)
Gemini Elf(x3)
Silver Fang
Opticlops
Beaver Warrior
Swordsman of Landstar
X-Saber Anu Piranha
Armored Lizard
Uraby
Battle Ox
Warrior Dai Grepher(x2)
Warrior of Zera
Sea Serpent Warrior of Darkness
Mystic Horseman
La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp
Neo the Magic Swordsman
Gazelle the King of Mythical Beasts
Kojikocy
Rogue Doll
Ryu-Kishkin Powered
Great White
Elemental Hero Burstinatrix(x2)
Elemental Hero Avian
Elemental Hero Clayman(x2)
Elemental Hero Sparkman
Kabazauls
Inpachi
Mystical Elf
Giant Soldier of Stone

(Spell)
Diffusion Wave-Motion
Scapegoat
Special Hurricane
Spell Economics
Infinite Cards
Soul Exchange(x2)
Dark Hole
Lightning Vortex
Inferno Tempest(x2)
Tribute to the Doomed(x3)
Fissure(x3)
Nobleman of Crossout(x2)
Black Pendant
Megamorph(x2)
Dragon Treasure
Axe of Despair
Gravity Axe – Grarl
Ring of Magnetism
Raregold Armor
Red Medicine
Rain of Mercy
Chaos Greed
Monster Reincarnation(x3)
Monster Reborn
Premature Burial(x2)
Heavy Storm(x2)
The Inexperienced Spy
Pot of Greed
Ookazi(x2)
Rush Recklessly
Samsara
Ancient Gear Factory
Ancient Gear Drill
The Graveyard in the Fourth Dimension
Reload(x3)
Mystic Plasma Zone
Luminous Spark
Yami
Gaia Power
Snatch Steal(x2)
Change of Heart(x3)
Creature Swap(x2)
Weapon Change
Level Up!
Magnet Circle Lv.2
The Warrior Returning Alive
Book of Life
Dark Factory of Mass Production
Call of the Mummy
The Third Sarcophagus
Swords of Revealing Light
Stamping Destruction(x3)
Remove Trap
Reversal Quiz
Continuous Destruction Punch
Card Destruction
Rod of Silence – Kay’Est
Mystical Space Typhoon

(Trap)
Malfunction
Rope of Life
Acid Trap Hole
Magical Hats
Option Hunter
Lightforce Sword
Gravity Bind
Trap Hole(x2)
Just Desserts
Interdimensional Matter Transporter(x2)
Backup Soldier
Return From the Different Dimension
Forced Requisition
Raigeki Break
Numinous Healer(x2)
Gift of the Mystical Elf
Dragon’s Rage(x2)
Reinforcements
Jar of Greed(x3)
Ready for Intercepting(x2)
Success Probability 0%(x2)
Judgement of the Desert
Cemetary Bomb(x2)
Miracle Kids
Castle Walls
Generation Shift(x2)
D. Tribe(x2)
Ceasefire
Dust Tornado(x3)
Waboku
Reckless Greed
Sakuretsu Armor(x2)
Curse of Anubis
Order to Smash
Narrow Pass
Burst Breath
Meteorain
Pyramid of Light
Human-Wave Tactics
Ultimate Offering

Please keep it non-banned, and anything within these cards is a good suggestion (doesn’t have to be a dragon deck after all).

Thanks in advance =)
lol, thank you =)

Monsters (19)

•Masaki The Legendary Swordsman
•Flame Manipulator
•Flame Swordsman
•Thousand Dragon
•Time Magician
•Baby Dragon
•Red Eyes Black Dragon
•Blue Eyes White Dragon
•Amazon Archer
•Banisher Of The Light
•Spear Dragon
•Karate Man
•Island Turtle
•7 Colored Fish
•Armored Lizard
•Magician Of Faith
•Sword Hunter
•Ray &Temperature
•Elemental Hero Bladedge

Spells (14)

•Polymerization (2x)
•Dragon Treasure
•Black Pendant
•Monster Reborn
•Scapegoat
•Change Of Heart
•Ookazi
•Malevolent Nuzzler
•Dian Keto The Cure Master
•Eternal Rest
•Shield & Sword
•Stop Defense
•Swords Of Revealing Light

Traps (7)

•Just Desserts
•Numinous Healer
•Ceasefire
•Enchanted Javelin
•Dust Tornado
•Reinforcements
•Dragon Capture Jar

Second Deck (Water Deck)
*Normal Monster*
Gagagigo x1
*Effect Monster*
Yomi Ship x3
Penguin Soldier x3
Mother Grizzly x2
Aqua Spirit x1
Mobius The Frost Monarch x2
Hydrogedon x3
Abyss Soldier x1
Unshaven Angler x1
Submarineroid x1
The Legendary Fisherman x1
Cloudian – Sheep Cloud x1
Amphibious Bugroth Mk-3 x1
Levia-Dragon – Daedalus x1
Treeborn Frog x1
Suijin x1
Star Boy x1
Warrior of Atlantis x1
Mermaid Knight x1
Revival Jam x1
Nightmare Penguin x1
*Non-Water Monsters*
D.D. Assailant x1
Lesser Fiend x1
Chainsaw Insect x1
*Magic Cards*
Hammer Shot x1
Heavy Storm x1
Black Pendent x1
Big Bang Shot x1
Salvage x2
Question x1
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
A legendary Ocean x3
Cost Down x1
Lightning Vortex x1
Swords of Revealing Light x1
Enemy Controller x1
Scapegoat x1
Different Dimension Capsule x1
*Trap Cards*
Trap Hole x1
Dust Tornado x1
Tornado Wall x3
Astral Barrier x2
Magic Cylinder x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Shadow Spell x1
Call of the Haunted x1
(This Deck is very versatile But mostly tries to use Tornado Wall, Astral Barrier, and A legendary Ocean)
Please help me by rating the decks